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'A Change for the Better' is a fanfic I wrote in comic book style way back in the mid-90s. I got the talented Dave Edwards to do the comic version in 95. Dave has given his permission to post the comic.
Dave Edwards - Artwork & Lettering
Me - Story & Coloring
I do not own nor profit from Transformers. Any OCs in this comic are copyrighted to me.
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Page 2 -
(panel 1)
Starscream watches a hawk circle above as he thinks, "If only I could change what I did, if only I could have left the Matrix alone, I'd still be my old self."
(panel 2)
The hawk begins a dive as he thinks, "Why did I have to be so driven by my desire to lead the Decepticons?"
(panel 3)
The hawk grasps its prey, a small rodent, in its talons as he thinks, "Stop berating yourself, what's done is done. I have to come to grips with these new feelings within me."
(panel 4)
The hawk carries off the rodent as he thinks, "I must cope with these... ugh!... Autobot-like tendencies that have cropped up within me."
(panel 5)
The hawk lands in its nest in a distant tree as he thinks, "And I must be careful about how I act around my fellow Decepticons from now on, because if I don't I'll end up like that rodent - dead."
(panel 6)
He stands up, "There's just one robot that can expose my changed persona, so my first course of action.."
Next: A Change for the Better Pg 3
Dave Edwards - Artwork & Lettering
Me - Story & Coloring
I do not own nor profit from Transformers. Any OCs in this comic are copyrighted to me.
----
Page 2 -
(panel 1)
Starscream watches a hawk circle above as he thinks, "If only I could change what I did, if only I could have left the Matrix alone, I'd still be my old self."
(panel 2)
The hawk begins a dive as he thinks, "Why did I have to be so driven by my desire to lead the Decepticons?"
(panel 3)
The hawk grasps its prey, a small rodent, in its talons as he thinks, "Stop berating yourself, what's done is done. I have to come to grips with these new feelings within me."
(panel 4)
The hawk carries off the rodent as he thinks, "I must cope with these... ugh!... Autobot-like tendencies that have cropped up within me."
(panel 5)
The hawk lands in its nest in a distant tree as he thinks, "And I must be careful about how I act around my fellow Decepticons from now on, because if I don't I'll end up like that rodent - dead."
(panel 6)
He stands up, "There's just one robot that can expose my changed persona, so my first course of action.."
Next: A Change for the Better Pg 3
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omg soo awesome!!!